Guest TermanatorXxX Posted May 19, 2013 Share Posted May 19, 2013 TermanatorXxX's ApplicationIn-game name: BlueLine-US- How did you hear about =US=? (Include link if there is one) Former member. Preferred branch of service: Air Force Geographical Location: USA Age: 21 XFire ID: rttermanatorxxxus Former Clans (include URLs, if available): =US= Rank, name and date of discharge from =US= (former members only): 2009 I believe from the AF as an SrA. Favorite BF3 weapon AND vehicle: M240/LAV-25 Tell us about yourself: I have been out of the loop in the gaming world for a while now, things are beginning to settle down in life and it is my desire to join a tactical unit that emphasizes teamwork, yet is also able to casually play Battlefield 3. Why do you want to join =US=? Much like the above response, I am seeking a realism unit that integrates military protocol and teamwork into Battlefield 3 while still being able to casually enjoy the game itself. It's my desire to find a unit that follows the Chain of Command and also assigns responsibilities to those as they climb in paygrade by earning it as a result of dedication, contributions and hard work towards the unit as a whole. Lastly, it is my desire to join for the diversity and endless possibilities that the =US= has to offer as far as different specialty departments and field assignments within assigned branches.As I'm sure that I will be asked about my current In-Game name above, I have played BF3 on the 360 for a long period of time but just recently purchased it for PC, I changed my nickname just prior to submitting this application (knowing that I would have to change it in the near future anyways if I receive an offer) but I did not realize that I can only do so every 7 days. Hence why my name already has =US= tags. I would like to request permission for a name change from my former name in this clan to the one proposed above if possible. Other games you play: GTA: SA, GTA IV, Sim City Can you attend our weekly meetings? Yes How many hours per week can you devote to =US=? 10-20 Can you attend clan practices and boot camps, follow the chain of command and actively participate on the forums and TeamSpeak? Yes Do you have any experience with websites/forums, recruiting or other special clan-related activites? Recruiting. Here in Unknown Soldiers above all else what we look for is respectful, Dedicated members who if cannot be active will at least notify their next in command of the situation per requirement. Is this something you can do? Yes Did you read the info on this page? http://clanunknownsoldiers.com/barracks/showthread.php?13144-Learn-about-the-Unknown-Soldiers Yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 19, 2013 Share Posted May 19, 2013 Hi guys, i would like to ask you for help with correction for final Univesity Thesis. Its about embankment dams, civil engineering. I'm not sure if the grammar is correct. Thanks for any help. Corriz Here is the text: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aZsA6NqruykDQcy-DLtYDu2eiVlYJVm0hYqVpU_l4rE/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MilkyDG_sT Posted May 19, 2013 Share Posted May 19, 2013 It's only 1 page long??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 19, 2013 Share Posted May 19, 2013 NO its only summary and anotation. Rest of the work is in Czech language. Thanks for any editing EDIT: Full thesis has 90 pages Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 19, 2013 Share Posted May 19, 2013 I will be realy glad for any feedback or corrections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 20, 2013 Share Posted May 20, 2013 You can edit this document as you like. Unless you change the whole meaning :-). I'll be glad when you write something like: " It's understandable and grammatically correct " Or if you change any parts of this document in grammatically correct form. Please Help me wth it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aZsA6NqruykDQcy-DLtYDu2eiVlYJVm0hYqVpU_l4rE/edit?usp=sharing Thank you PO3.corriz=US= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RET.Maj.ShadowOp=US= Posted May 20, 2013 Share Posted May 20, 2013 Just got back form leave today corriz, I'll read this later today and let you have some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 20, 2013 Share Posted May 20, 2013 Thank you for your time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RET.Maj.ShadowOp=US= Posted May 20, 2013 Share Posted May 20, 2013 Is this for Masters or PhD? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 20, 2013 Share Posted May 20, 2013 Is this for Masters or PhD? Masters, PhD will be after 5 years. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 20, 2013 Share Posted May 20, 2013 Thank you all for the time spent correctiing this text. Now the document is rewritten by your advice. I would like to be sure that everything is already grammatically correct. Can you give me some last feedback if it is O.K? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aZsA6NqruykDQcy-DLtYDu2eiVlYJVm0hYqVpU_l4rE/edit?usp=sharing Thank you for your time. Corriz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RET.Maj.ShadowOp=US= Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 I do have a question. Is this thesis being submitted in english, or is it being translated back? I've made many changes and suggestions on a copy i've made, but if it is being translated back, then most will probably not translate correctly. However, if this is being submitted as an English document then the changes will be useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corriz Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 Its a part of thesis witch must be written in english language. It will not be translate back. Its great that you have it. And that you found a time for correction. Are you working in civil engineering? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RET.Capt.RUSHER16=US= Posted May 31, 2013 Share Posted May 31, 2013 The engineering is not my strong for review would need to understand and read the contents of the thesis. But I understand as is narrated in the summary is much more orderly and more specific. I wish you success in your thesis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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