Guest JeZuzzz Posted September 6, 2014 Share Posted September 6, 2014 Hey guys, how's it going? I just felt like sharing this soundtrack I've made yesterday. The sounds were a bit hard to make, but I succeeded! If you would have any hints or anything you'd like to say about this track, please do. I am open for any critic. https://soundcloud.com/yannick-dj-b-side/straight-away-jezuz-second-preview Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LTC.DentalMav=US= Posted September 6, 2014 Share Posted September 6, 2014 First, this sounds really cool, i really like it. I think I have listened to it about 20 times :-P. The one thing that does not sound right to me is when the percussion comes in at about 50s. Each snare hit is a triplet/roll which I feel takes away from the beautiful sound you have going on. Maybe make one hit a single and every other hit a triplet/roll and or all singles? I dunno, it just seems to draw the attention away from your score. The rest of the percussion sounds good. Overall very very nice piece :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hornet117 Posted September 6, 2014 Share Posted September 6, 2014 What LtGeneral said...maybe make the first a triple and the other single? Other than that just make it longer! I hate having to re-start a good track over and over. ;) Pretty awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JeZuzzz Posted September 6, 2014 Share Posted September 6, 2014 Thanks for the suggestions, Sir and Sgt. I've made the snare the first 3 times a single, and at every fourth time a triplet, which sounds better I think! Also, I'll finish this soundtrack as a full one, so you'll have more joy from the song :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RET.Capt.RUSHER16=US= Posted September 6, 2014 Share Posted September 6, 2014 Nice sound!!!!!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RET.1SG.Maysin=US= Posted September 7, 2014 Share Posted September 7, 2014 Talented Pvt! I could never make something like that, lol :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JeZuzzz Posted September 7, 2014 Share Posted September 7, 2014 Talented Pvt! I could never make something like that, lol :P Haha well thank you, SFC. I've been producing music for like 6 years so yeah, it needs some experience. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RET.Maj.ShadowOp=US= Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 Pvt, without the drums it sounds like a FF7 track. Now i want to re-play FF7. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Oxygen5 Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 Nice soundtrack Private !! really interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest REDF1GHTER Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 awesome job on your productions Pvt., i really like this genre's of music, would love to hear the full tracks. especially drop the bass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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